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Posted by Sadie (Guest) - Friday, October 24 2003, 11:04:28 (EDT)
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Jeff, it's a good paper. However, it is an absolute SIN to use the word "very" in a paper unless it is necessary. Similarly, go through the paper & look for slang phrases. Get rid of those phrases to make the paper sound more academic.



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