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Re: Request to Kris.....
Posted by Tiglath (Guest) - Thursday, July 28 2005, 5:24:42 (CEST)
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Dear Kris,

Magnificent work as usual.

I hope you don't mind my constructive criticism below:

1. Use red, white and blue in the ad attached to the jar. Perhaps red text color for the writing and leave the background blue and white.

2. Put the '99% Fact Free' on the sticker itself possibly in the lower right hand corner.

3. Keep the ad and message a little less cluttered. Perhaps remove the bread and the writing in red about Iraq, Afghaistan and Libya.
By the way why Libya?

4. Overall make the jar the focus and zoom in more on it.


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